Sunday, May 31, 2026

scene 19

scene 18

EXT. JOHN AND JAN'S MASTER BEDROOM DECK - SUNSET 

John and Jan in rockers on deck with view to last light of day on handsome homes on big lots in rolling hills dotted with oak trees. sliding glass door to master bedroom behind them. OCCASIONAL CRICKET CHIRP throughout. They swirl and sip at the same time.

JAN: Have you told Kate?

JOHN: Tomorrow after we hear more.

Long pause.

JAN: Have you ever talked to Hunter about him?

JOHN (BEAT): Sort of. Briefly. And mostly listened. He'd had a couple drinks, brought it up out of the blue and dropped it just as abruptly. I thought to pursue but did not.

JAN: When was this?

JOHN: A few weeks before the wedding. You and Kate and Barb went to Sausalito. 

JAN: I remember. You and Hunter went for a drive in the Boxster.

JOHN: We did.

JAN: To Bodega.

JOHN: Good memory.

JAN: Do you remember how he brought it up?

JOHN: He asked about my relationship with my dad. 

JAN (TWO BEATS): I'm sorry, John, you told me this.

JOHN: I thought I might have.

JAN: You stopped at the shack for oysters   

JOHN: Yep. Hunter drove down, I was driving back so he asked if I minded if he had a couple drinks. 

JAN: You said he had a few margaritas.

JOHN: Four over the course of the hour I nursed my beer. 

JAN: He told you about a dream he had but I don't remember the details. 

JOHN: Neither do I other than something about a cattle drive river crossing and a cowboy across a fire from him.  And the sadness in his eyes as he looked off into space after telling me the dream before suddenly gulping back his margarita, setting his glass heavily on the table, standing and excusing himself to the restroom and saying he was ready to go whenever I was. Halfway to the restroom he turns around, looks at me and nods. Says, John boy, sure as shucks, that's him.

Both startled when their PHONES RINGTONE The Beach Boys' Little Surfer Girl. They pick up and stare at the Tom and Hunter lemonade patio selfie Chloe took. They show each other the same photo, look at their phones as the sun disappears behind a hilltop.

scene 18

scene 17

INT. MASTER BEDROOM - SUNSET

Barbara and Brian naked under sweat-soaked sheet in bed aimed at hillside big window to Pismo Beach and homes lower on the hill. 

BRIAN: So would you be willing to paint a clearer picture of Tom, Olivia and Elvis and some of the specifics of how Hunter came to be, other than the obvious?

BARBARA: Of course. And, by the way, it's all in Hunter's short story, Honda Knot. 

BRIAN: I'll read it. 

BARBARA: Rumor is it may be coming to a theater near us in the not so distant future?

BRIAN: Really?

BARBARA: More on that after you read it. 

BRIAN: K. Reno.

BARBARA: Reno. Tom, speaking of Honda Knot, was coming off the end of a job on a cattle ranch.

BRIAN: Cowboy?

BARBARA: From Texas, but no idea where. More on that later, I reckon. A cowboy in town for a few days before catching a plane to L-A to meet a friend for a fishing excursion in Baja. Didn't even know Elvis was in town. Olivia had tickets with a friend, the friend got sick, Olivia drove up from where she lived in Marysville, stayed at Fitzgerald's. Tom stayed at The Sundowner. Both may well be no longer. How much time do we have?

BRIAN: Ten minutes, tik tik tik.

BARBARA: They bumped into and spilled their beers on each other, beginning an exchange that led to Tom inviting Olivia for a ride around Lake Tahoe the next day.

BRIAN: Thanksgiving.

BARBARA: Olivia would have gone home to be with her mother and father but they were out of town for a funeral.

BRIAN: What town?

BARBARA: Auburn. Her father Ed was a retired civil engineer for Sacramento County, her mother Carol retired from the postal service. 

BRIAN: They had Olivia when they were older.

BARBARA: They adopted Olivia when she was two.

BRIAN: Oh.

BARBARA: More on that, the Tahoe drive and a night in Carson City on the way.

BRIAN: Can't wait.

BARBARA: In case you ever wondered what Hunter's middle name is.

BRIAN (BEAT): No.

BARBARA: Yes. Proof enough that it was a memorable evening.  

They exit sheets and frame naked on their sides of the bed.