Wednesday, June 3, 2026

scene 23

scene 22

INT. CAFE- DOWNTOWN LARAMIE - DAY 

Business busy, MURMUR OF PATRONS, FAINT COWBOY INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC, gingham table clothes, framed local landscape paintings 

HOSTESS, PHOEBE by her name tag, 25, menus in hand, walks Wanda and Daisy into frame and table at window to PEDESTRIANS on sidewalk, parked cars with Wyoming plates, and the shops across the street. 

Wanda and Daisy, set purses on table, take their seats.

HOSTESS: Your waiter will be here in a moment.

DAISY/WANDA: Thank you.

Hostess leaves. 

WANDA: Wanna see a selfie?

Daisy nods vigorously, they scoot closer together, Wanda gets phone from purse, shows Daisy the lemonade selfie Chloe took with Hunter and Tom. They stare at it.

DAISY: So tell me everything you know about her.

WANDA: She's seventeen, lives in San Luis Obispo with her mother Barbara, is about to start her senior year, scholar and surfer. Barbara's parents John and Jan are retired attorneys in Paso Robles. Last night she made a vegetarian casserole that Tom is going to get the recipe for. Today they're going on a horseback ride with Hunter's girlfriend Jackie, a history professor at New Mexico State University there in Las Cruces. 

WANDA'S PHONE CHIRPS. She picks up, stares at selfie Chloe has taken with Hunter, Tom, and Jackie bunched together at San Augustin Pass parking area.  

DAISY: We've been there. Clem and I. 

WANDA: Where is there?

DAISY: San Augustin Pass on highway seventy between Las Cruces and Alamogordo, between the Organ Mountains and the San Andres Mountains. If I recall correctly.

WANDA: What were you doing there?

DAISY: On the way to White Sands with friends we had in El Paso. That's what's called the Tularosa Basin in the background. She's radiant.

WANDA: She is.

DAISY: And look at Tom's smile.

WANDA: I am. 

WAITER, GREG by name tag, 21, arrives.

WAITER: Good morning, ladies. 

DAISY/WANDA: Good morning. 

WAITER: I am Greg, per the nametag.  Have you had a chance to look at the menu?

WANDA: We know what we want, Greg.

WAITER: Alrighty then.

WANDA: I'll have the French toast and coffee.

WAITER (WRITING ON PAD): French and coffee.

He looks to Daisy.

DAISY: I'LL the eggs over easy and hash browns, crispy, and a coffee.

WAITER (WRITING): Over and crisp hash, coffee. Ice water with coffee?

DAISY/WANDA: Yes.

WANDA: And I'll add an orange juice.

DAISY: Second that.

WAITER: O-J times two.

WANDA/DAISY: Thank you.

WAITER: My pleasure. So who knows H-C Hardyn?

Wanda and Daisy look at each other, at waiter.

WAITER: The man in the photo who isn't the cowboy is a best-selling author, in case you didn't know and unless that's H-C Hardyn's doppelganger. Hardyn with a Y. And yes, I am being absolutely none-of-my-business nosey.

WANDA: How do you know him?

WAITER: I'm an English major at the U. I wrote a paper on Isleton last semester. I'm re-reading Yubaville before I start his latest novel Foglost. How do you know him?

WANDA: I don't. My husband, the cowboy, just met him.

WAITER: Cool. Sorry if I was intrusive, which of course I was.

WANDA: Not at all.

WAITER: B-R-B with your water, coffee and O-J.

He leaves. Wanda and Daisy look at each other, then back at the photo.

DAISY: Small world.

WANDA: Getting smaller.

scene 22

scene 21

EXT. MOUNTAIN CABIN IN WOODS - DAY

EDIT 6/614 Cedric does NOT know “Travis,” he knows a “Tom Walker from Bandera Texas.”

RUTH: How.

Etc

 CHANGES JOHN/JAN WINERY

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Deck aimed at meadow, footpath through which into Lodgepole Pine forest. Grill, table and chairs, fire pit, telescope, bench swing.  Sliding glass door to master bedroom behind KATE and CEDRIC, fit 70-somethings, in chairs with small table between them. Their phones, pitcher of water and their half-empty glasses on table. Both in jeans, running shoes, unbuttoned flannel of t-shirts. Kate's attention is aimed at her laptop, Cedric turns a page halfway through Foglost. 

INTERMITTENT WARBLER SONG throughout.

CEDRIC: Do we know if Hunter drinks or drank.

Kate looks up, smiles at him, squeezes his hand.

KATE: Your first do we know.

He winks. 

CEDRIC: I was waiting until we were married.

They kiss.

KATE: Why do you ask? 

CEDRIC: A character in the book.

KATE: We know that he did, we are pretty certain he no longer does. He looked great at John's birthday. Clear eyes, working out. 

CEDRIC: When will I meet him?

KATE: Chloe's graduation for sure. Which reminds me that she's at Hunter's for the rest of her summer. I think she arrived yesterday. Hunter's renting a motorcycle for a tour, the route of which I don't remember but I think Flagstaff is a stop.

Her PHONE RINGTONES THWACK OF CLUB ON GOLF BALL AND MAN YELLING FORE! 

She picks up.

KATE: Hey. 

He's right here in the middle of Foglost.

(Her face expresses surprise.)

Wow. I'm speechless, John. 

Do we know his middle name?

Well send the picture.

Okay. Call me when you hear more.

Love you too.

(She sets phone.)

CEDRIC: Kate? What's wrong?

KATE: I don't know if anything is wrong. Yesterday I told you that Hunter's short story Honda Knot might get made into a movie.

CEDRIC: Yes. And you telling me that day in Dallas that the character Cade Satterwhite is based on what Hunter knows about his father, Tom Walker from Texas.

KATE: Good memory.

CEDRIC: Hard to forget.

KATE: It's Thomas Travis Walker from Bandera, Texas. He arrived at Hunter's yesterday. He and Hunter and Chloe are riding horses with Hunter's new girlfriend today.

CEDRIC (BEAT): Kate. I knew a man named Thomas Travis Walker from Bandera, Texas.

KATE (BEAT): How? When? Where?

CEDRIC: Vietnam.

Kate picks up when her PHONE BUZZES. She stares at and shows Cedric the lemonade selfie Chloe took with Hunter and Tom.

CEDRIC: Been awhile but I see the resemblance.   

KATE: Would he know your name?

Cedric nods. 

CEDRIC: If it's him. And unless he's forgotten saving my life.

They look at each other.

KATE: A story you'd be willing to share?

He nods.

CEDRIC: Let's take a walk.

She pockets phone, takes his hand. They walk to and enter bedroom, leave view.