I'm a little bogged down in allegiance to old form tin need of change.
The last two questions speak to the...
exactly where i'm at with this.
So, next step is a step away, let beats (from Jackie arrive at Hunter's) find their places, continue from Jackie's arrival at Hunter's - the beginning of the second half of the screenplay - in a different blog, Final Prep 2. the next/last post of this blog will be a link to that.