Monday, June 1, 2026

scene 20

scene 19

EXT. HUNTER'S PATIO - NIGHT

Hunter, Tom and Chloe seated at tables, remnants of dinner on plates and silverware pushed to center near glass pitcher of ice water. Each with half-empty glasses at hand. Tom's hat on back of chair. Starry sky. 

HUNTER: So do you and Wanda have plans for your twenty-fifth?

TOM: We do. Goin' to Hawaii.

CHLOE: That's cool. Which island or islands?

TOM: Oahu. Doin' Waikiki the first few nights, last few in a place called Kailua, if I'm sayin' it right.

CHLOE: You are. That's where I learned to surf.

TOM: Wanda don't believe it but I'm takin' a lesson at Waikiki.

CHLOE: Great place to learn.

TOM: That's what I been readin'. Figure I'll do plenty a fallin' before I get the hang of it but I'll already be wet and it's gotta be a softer landin' than comin' off a horse. Did you take a lesson and how old were ya?

CHLOE: Twelve. My mom taught me. Have yiu been before?

TOM: No ma'am. First time for both of us.

CHLOE: That's great. Excited?

TOM: We are. Not so much about the flyin' part but that's part a the package. Where do you surf outta San Luis Obispo?

CHLOE: Pismo, Morrow Bay, sometimes farther up or down the coast.

TOM: I reckon the water's a little colder than Hawaii.

CHLOE: You have to wear a wetsuit. Speaking of cold, what's the coldest Laramie gets?

TOM: Plenty cold enough, then add the wind. It'll keep ya inside. Below zero most a the winter. Been as low as fifty below.

CHLOE: Kerrville's probably a little milder.

TOM: A lot milder. Lows in the thirties. Above. Usually warmer. Sometimes a little colder but that's mostly rare. Nothin' ya can't layer up to take a walk in. Darn near tropical compared to Laramie. Not so tropical that we won't have a fireplace.

CHLOE: Maybe tropical enough in the summer.

TOM: Warmer and stickier for sure but we'll take the trade. You prob'ly got it pretty good weather-wise in San Luis Obispo.

CHLOE: I'm spoiled. But I have been in twenty-below.

TOM: Where and when?

CHLOE: Two Christmases ago at my aunt Kate and her husband Cedric's house in Wilson, Wyoming.

TOM: Alright. 

CHLOE: Before they were married. 

HUNTER: Kate is John's sister. 

TOM: Okay.

CHLOE: You've probably been to Wilson.

TOM: I have. Usually for fishin' with my friend Clem whose wife Daisy is who Wanda's stayin' home with. 

CHLOE: Cedric fishes.

HUNTER: They share a trout creek with a neighbor. 

CHLOE: Well that works alright.

HUNTER: You fly fish.

TOM: Yessir. You ever do any fishin'?

Hunter shakes his head.

TOM (CONT.): Think you'd be interested in givin' it a shot sometime?

Hunter nods.

CHLOE: I wanna come.

TOM: Hope y'all can when we're settled into Kerrville. Room'll be watin'. My friend Gil's got a boat we'll put on the lake.

CHLOE: What lake?

TOM: Medina. Which is actually reservoir, if ya wanna look it up.

CHLOE: I will.

TOM: Well folks, I hate to be a party-pooper but it's a little past our bedtime so I reckon I'll be a party-pooper and get on to bed after I call and get 'em caught up, per my standin' orders from both.

Tom stands, puts on hat.

CHLOE: Did you send them the selfie I took?

TOM: I did. I'm sure they both got framed and placed by now. Maybe we could take one or two more before I leave in the mornin'.

Chloe nods.

HUNTER: I'm up with the sun and right here with coffee so pour a cup and join me if you're up.

TOM: I do the same every mornin'. You got a date. Chloe, another thing before I leave is that casserole recipe. That was delicious.

CHLOE: Thank you. I'm glad your liked it.  

Tom tips his hat.

TOM: Goodnight, y'all.

CHLOE/HUNTER: Goodnight, Tom.

Hunter watches Chloe watch Tom walk to kitchen, stop and turn to them.

TOM: Hunter, I hope you don't mind signin' my copy a Foglost.

HUNTER: I'd be very happy to, Tom. On the condition that you sign the guest book.

Tom nods.

TOM: I plan to.

HUNTER: Thanks.

TOM: Thank y'all. I won't forget this.

HUNTER: Neither will we.

Hunter and Chloe watch Tom continue to kitchen and out of view.

CHLOE: Dad?

HUNTER: Daughter.

CHLOE: Assuming Jackie's cousin could wrangle another horse...and that Jackie and her cousin are okay with the idea...

HUNTER: Would you be okay with Tom coming along, assuming he can and would like to?

Chloe nods. Hunter picks up phone, speaks into it.

HUNTER: Jackie. 

Right here across the patio table from me.

We are absolutely still on. The reason I called, by the way.


END Act 1

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